No one is born ugly, we’re just born in a judgemental society.
Kim Namjoon
She doesn’t know when she made it,
May be somewhere in her dreams…
The town gathered around uninvited,
To scrutinize her work, it seems.
They showered praise and kind words…
They all fell in love.
For it was The Perfect Portrait,
Just one sight was enough.
They said the shapes were adorable,
The colors were mesmerizing…
Just like the sky full of stars beams with pride,
The canvas holding it was shining.
Every morning she checked the painting,
To make sure the beauty is not lost.
The love of the towners & shine of the canvas,
Mattered for her the most.
Slowly the canvas became dull,
As the days passed by…
All her efforts to save the painting were in vain,
Nobody understood why.
Soon the criticism flooded her,
Shapes became distorted; colors started to fade…
She found herself crying,
Over something she involuntarily made.
The towners were frowning, they were disappointed,
Their praise & love became mockery & hate.
She blamed herself for all the downfall…
But couldn’t figure out what was her mistake.
She kept the picture hidden now,
As it was the reason for her heartache…
Now it stays in a lonely dark corner,
What once was called The Perfect Portrait.
16 replies on “The Perfect Portrait”
So beautiful Akriti.
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Thank you Ashok…m happy you liked what u read! 😇😇
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My pleasure Akriti.
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Beautifully written, Akriti. I loved the metaphor
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Appreciate your kind words Shweta 😇 I’m glad you liked it…. 💙
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You’re very welcome 🙂
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Beautiful writing 🤩💜
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Thank you so much Jude, m glad u like it 😊
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Such a pleasure Jain.
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I like your content dear friend akriti.
Every problem has one solution.
I hate society and judgements.
Be positive and love yourself guys.
Keep rocking! Have a nice weekend akriti.
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Exactly…love urself…even on hard days!
Thanks for stopping by Sreenadh, you too have a good time! 😇
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Beautiful 👏🏻👏🏻
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Thanks Aarushi 😊🙂
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Heart wrenching…. You have penned it very beautifully.
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Sad reality of everyone’s life! Thank for stopping by, really appreciate! 🙏🙂
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My pleasure.😊
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